tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post7705345842808245230..comments2024-01-01T17:04:12.950-06:00Comments on Emily Brisse: "Black Oaks"Emily Brissehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-39169854638719612802013-09-13T20:52:53.519-05:002013-09-13T20:52:53.519-05:00Yes and yes. Thank you dear woman-who-has-gone-bef...Yes and yes. Thank you dear woman-who-has-gone-before. There is and will ever be magic in the madness, I'm sure. xoEmily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-39166397672931783482013-09-13T20:51:10.432-05:002013-09-13T20:51:10.432-05:00One of my favorites. :)One of my favorites. :)Emily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-32856667888056912012013-09-11T09:22:15.699-05:002013-09-11T09:22:15.699-05:00I'm missing your voice here, Emily, and can on...I'm missing your voice here, Emily, and can only imagine how full (overflowing) your hours are these days. Much love to you and the writer within who no-doubt needs a little love and affirmation that there will, indeed, be time for her down the road. woodbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08954610618499723357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-14810404932206469032013-05-04T18:41:23.121-05:002013-05-04T18:41:23.121-05:00Beautiful! I've not read of this before and it...Beautiful! I've not read of this before and it is lovely. Thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-2922662702555801382013-04-18T14:31:18.968-05:002013-04-18T14:31:18.968-05:00I knew you'd come through with something stunn...I knew you'd come through with something stunning, Linda. Thank you for these, and I think just the word "quartet" is a lovely thing to spend an afternoon musing over. :)Emily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-36687922050844782692013-04-13T15:49:44.306-05:002013-04-13T15:49:44.306-05:00Oh, of course someone would have mentioned "L...Oh, of course someone would have mentioned "Little Gidding"! But there's more place-poetry than that in "The Four Quartets". No one has captured the ambiguity of The River better than Eliot - a remnant of his American life that stayed with him. <br /><br /><i> I do not know much about gods; but I think that the river<br />Is a strong brown god - sullen, untamed and intractable,<br />Patient to some degree, at first recognised as a frontier;<br />Useful, untrustworthy, as a conveyor of commerce;<br />The only a problem confronting the builder of bridges.<br />The problem once solved, the brown god is almost forgotten<br />By the dwellers in cities - ever, however, implacable.<br />Keeping his seasons, and rages, destroyer, reminder<br />Of what men choose to forget. Unhonoured, unpropitiated<br />By worshippers of the machine, but waiting, watching and waiting.<br />His rhythm was present in the nursery bedroom,<br />In the rank ailanthus of the April dooryard,<br />In the smell of grapes on the autumn table,<br />And the evening circle in the winter gaslight.<br /><br /> The river is within us, the sea is all about us;<br />The sea is the land's edge also, the granite,<br />Into which it reaches, the beaches where it tosses<br />Its hints of earlier and other creation:<br />The starfish, the horseshoe crab, the whale's backbone;<br />The pools where it offers to our curiosity<br />The more delicate algae and the sea anemone.<br />It tosses up our losses, the torn seine,<br />The shattered lobsterpot, the broken oar<br />And the gear of foreign dead men. The sea has many voices,<br />Many gods and many voices.</i><br /><br />And speaking of many gods, I think my absolutely favorite poems about place are by Cavafy - "Ithaca" and "The God Abandons Antony". I prefer Durrell's translation within his "Alexandrian Quartet", but I can't find that text online, so this will have to do.<br /><br /><i>When suddenly, at midnight, you hear<br />an invisible procession going by<br />with exquisite music, voices,<br />don’t mourn your luck that’s failing now,<br />work gone wrong, your plans<br />all proving deceptive—don’t mourn them uselessly.<br />As one long prepared, and graced with courage,<br />say goodbye to her, the Alexandria that is leaving.<br />Above all, don’t fool yourself, don’t say<br />it was a dream, your ears deceived you:<br />don’t degrade yourself with empty hopes like these.<br />As one long prepared, and graced with courage,<br />as is right for you who proved worthy of this kind of city,<br />go firmly to the window<br />and listen with deep emotion, but not<br />with the whining, the pleas of a coward;<br />listen—your final delectation—to the voices,<br />to the exquisite music of that strange procession,<br />and say goodbye to her, to the Alexandria you are losing. </i><br /><br />It just occurred to me that my favorite poem is the "Four Quartets" and my favorite novel(s) is "The Alexandria Quartet". I have no idea what that means, but it's interesting.shoreacreshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16284698314697628805noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-22092475335064750172013-04-13T09:25:49.173-05:002013-04-13T09:25:49.173-05:00Agree. Wow. I feel breathless at the end of this o...Agree. Wow. I feel breathless at the end of this one, Clyde. Thank you!Emily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-28265249490791066132013-04-12T14:17:47.422-05:002013-04-12T14:17:47.422-05:00Beautiful words here! Simply mesmerizing! Thanks...Beautiful words here! Simply mesmerizing! Thanks for posting this.WildBillhttp://www.wildramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-376671336797301212013-04-12T12:48:22.024-05:002013-04-12T12:48:22.024-05:00One of the best of all place poems. "To kneel...One of the best of all place poems. "To kneel where prayer has been valid" is a line that haunts me.<br />Little Gidding<br /><br />I<br />Midwinter spring is its own season<br />Sempiternal though sodden towards sundown,<br />Suspended in time, between pole and tropic.<br />When the short day is brightest, with frost and fire,<br />The brief sun flames the ice, on pond and ditches,<br />In windless cold that is the heart's heat,<br />Reflecting in a watery mirror<br />A glare that is blindness in the early afternoon.<br />And glow more intense than blaze of branch, or brazier,<br />Stirs the dumb spirit: no wind, but pentecostal fire<br />In the dark time of the year. Between melting and freezing<br />The soul's sap quivers. There is no earth smell<br />Or smell of living thing. This is the spring time<br />But not in time's covenant. Now the hedgerow<br />Is blanched for an hour with transitory blossom<br />Of snow, a bloom more sudden<br />Than that of summer, neither budding nor fading,<br />Not in the scheme of generation.<br />Where is the summer, the unimaginable<br />Zero summer?<br /><br /> If you came this way,<br />Taking the route you would be likely to take<br />From the place you would be likely to come from,<br />If you came this way in may time, you would find the hedges<br />White again, in May, with voluptuary sweetness.<br />It would be the same at the end of the journey,<br />If you came at night like a broken king,<br />If you came by day not knowing what you came for,<br />It would be the same, when you leave the rough road<br />And turn behind the pig-sty to the dull facade<br />And the tombstone. And what you thought you came for<br />Is only a shell, a husk of meaning<br />From which the purpose breaks only when it is fulfilled<br />If at all. Either you had no purpose<br />Or the purpose is beyond the end you figured<br />And is altered in fulfilment. There are other places<br />Which also are the world's end, some at the sea jaws,<br />Or over a dark lake, in a desert or a city—<br />But this is the nearest, in place and time,<br />Now and in England.<br /><br /> If you came this way,<br />Taking any route, starting from anywhere,<br />At any time or at any season,<br />It would always be the same: you would have to put off<br />Sense and notion. You are not here to verify,<br />Instruct yourself, or inform curiosity<br />Or carry report. You are here to kneel<br />Where prayer has been valid. And prayer is more<br />Than an order of words, the conscious occupation<br />Of the praying mind, or the sound of the voice praying.<br />And what the dead had no speech for, when living,<br />They can tell you, being dead: the communication<br />Of the dead is tongued with fire beyond the language of the living.<br />Here, the intersection of the timeless moment<br />Is England and nowhere. Never and always.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05449372469687321864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-91456247437712246532013-04-11T17:07:11.163-05:002013-04-11T17:07:11.163-05:00As one with ties to Illinois,I suggest Sandburg...As one with ties to Illinois,I suggest Sandburg's "Chicago," and all of Spoon River Anthology."Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05449372469687321864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-23334978224702963862013-04-11T13:03:02.921-05:002013-04-11T13:03:02.921-05:00You are a big Pablo Neruda fan too? His passion w...You are a big Pablo Neruda fan too? His passion with words is unparalleled in my humble opinion, although I have to admit. Since "meeting" you I have become a very big Mary Oliver fan. Her writing evokes emotion, nearly every time I read it!<br /><br />Tell your baby that he has a terrific Mom!WildBillhttp://www.wildramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-38016132273943365652013-04-11T09:49:33.328-05:002013-04-11T09:49:33.328-05:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-75346263800797439922013-04-10T13:23:12.488-05:002013-04-10T13:23:12.488-05:00Bill, Bill, Bill. Neruda has been my favorite poet...Bill, Bill, Bill. Neruda has been my favorite poet since I was in high school, and somehow I've never come across this poem. Gorgeous.<br /><br />And I know exactly what you mean about those last lines. Yours was also my reaction. This poem I read to Elliot many more times than just three, and after, I said to him, "Someday, if you're lucky, you might feel this way, too."Emily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-58318529828487631642013-04-10T13:19:37.704-05:002013-04-10T13:19:37.704-05:00Another home run, Clyde. In the future, my worksho...Another home run, Clyde. In the future, my workshop participants are already thanking you. And I love that you posted the whole poem here. This post is becoming a depository of beautiful words.Emily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-49624147818290637482013-04-10T13:17:07.190-05:002013-04-10T13:17:07.190-05:00Ah, Jim Moore. Beautiful. Thanks for pointing me t...Ah, Jim Moore. Beautiful. Thanks for pointing me to it, these lines in particular: <br /><br />"...Everyone/ is going for a walk on that road/ one time soon."Emily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-73635034792078726382013-04-10T13:14:36.545-05:002013-04-10T13:14:36.545-05:00Great! Thanks, Audrey. Good idea to reference curr...Great! Thanks, Audrey. Good idea to reference current local talent. :)Emily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-45370921227033090502013-04-10T13:13:50.025-05:002013-04-10T13:13:50.025-05:00Perfect!
I've been reading the poems in Olive...Perfect!<br /><br />I've been reading the poems in Oliver's BLUE IRIS one by one, three times each, aloud to Elliot almost every day. It's amazing how even babies can recognize cadence, natural breaks, etc. And what a way for me to anticipate spring while I share language with my darling. <br /><br />Love that quote. Will be using it!Emily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-25671949625645655672013-04-10T13:10:18.183-05:002013-04-10T13:10:18.183-05:00Thank you, Ian! I'm not familiar with much of ...Thank you, Ian! I'm not familiar with much of Thomas' work, so I'm excited to dive in. So helpful!Emily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-22928165118754493112013-04-10T13:09:35.046-05:002013-04-10T13:09:35.046-05:00Clyde, so have I! What a very special view of the ...Clyde, so have I! What a very special view of the White Mountains he had, huh? It's not surprising that he was inspired by the natural world around him. Thank you for this list!Emily Brissehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784086623918098981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-71244979664776348602013-04-10T07:13:15.426-05:002013-04-10T07:13:15.426-05:00An amazing, epic poem My favorite line:And to tel...An amazing, epic poem My favorite line:And to tell the truth I don't want to let go of the wrists of idleness, I don't want to sell my live for money, I don't even want to come in out of the rain". This describes me, exactly.<br /><br />And one of my favorite place poems is"<br /><br />Lost in the forest...<br /><br />Lost in the forest, I broke off a dark twig<br />and lifted its whisper to my thirsty lips:<br />maybe it was the voice of the rain crying,<br />a cracked bell, or a torn heart.<br /><br />Something from far off it seemed<br />deep and secret to me, hidden by the earth,<br />a shout muffled by huge autumns,<br />by the moist half-open darkness of the leaves.<br /><br />Wakening from the dreaming forest there, the hazel-sprig<br />sang under my tongue, its drifting fragrance<br />climbed up through my conscious mind<br /><br />as if suddenly the roots I had left behind<br />cried out to me, the land I had lost with my childhood---<br />and I stopped, wounded by the wandering scent.<br /><br />-Pablo Neruda<br /><br />Hope you like this.WildBillhttp://www.wildramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-40737156270696195892013-04-09T15:49:08.163-05:002013-04-09T15:49:08.163-05:00The Wild Swans at Coole
W.B. Yeats
The trees are...The Wild Swans at Coole <br />W.B. Yeats<br /><br />The trees are in their autumn beauty, <br />The woodland paths are dry, <br />Under the October twilight the water <br />Mirrors a still sky; <br />Upon the brimming water among the stones 5<br />Are nine and fifty swans. <br /> <br />The nineteenth Autumn has come upon me <br />Since I first made my count; <br />I saw, before I had well finished, <br />All suddenly mount 10<br />And scatter wheeling in great broken rings <br />Upon their clamorous wings. <br /> <br />I have looked upon those brilliant creatures, <br />And now my heart is sore. <br />All’s changed since I, hearing at twilight, 15<br />The first time on this shore, <br />The bell-beat of their wings above my head, <br />Trod with a lighter tread. <br /> <br />Unwearied still, lover by lover, <br />They paddle in the cold, 20<br />Companionable streams or climb the air; <br />Their hearts have not grown old; <br />Passion or conquest, wander where they will, <br />Attend upon them still. <br /> <br />But now they drift on the still water 25<br />Mysterious, beautiful; <br />Among what rushes will they build, <br />By what lake’s edge or pool <br />Delight men’s eyes, when I awake some day <br />To find they have flown away?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05449372469687321864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-3874810528921834542013-04-09T14:10:59.155-05:002013-04-09T14:10:59.155-05:00Here's one by Jim Moore: http://minnesota.pub...Here's one by Jim Moore: http://minnesota.publicradio.org/collections/special/columns/state-of-the-arts/archive/2010/03/minnesota-poetry-jim-moores-a-summer-afternoon-venice.shtml<br />It's called, "A Summer Afternoon, Venice", and is from his book, The Freedom of History. Hope you like it!<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07633583410829524075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-84964565829631610112013-04-09T11:58:41.784-05:002013-04-09T11:58:41.784-05:00If you're looking for "place" poetry...If you're looking for "place" poetry published in Minnesota, I'd recommend the literary magazine, Lake Region Review, publishing its third volume this year. Here's the link: http://lakeregionwriters.net/lake-region-review/Minnesota Prairie Rootshttp://mnprairieroots.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-37610314241991170242013-04-09T11:52:08.044-05:002013-04-09T11:52:08.044-05:00Emily:
OMG! I just read this poem two days ago. I...Emily:<br /><br />OMG! I just read this poem two days ago. I often return to my Mary Oliver collections for inspiration. <br /><br />I suggest "Even in Quiet Places" - William Stafford, particularly the afterword, written by Kim Stafford, pp. 109-116.<br /><br />Also, in the introduction: ""Have you a place where, when the wrold ends, you want to be?" Plus poem p. 100: "You Reading This: Stop"<br /><br />RichardWalk With Father Naturehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11278417564714876894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5646797751527572885.post-82904364762850707522013-04-09T11:10:12.497-05:002013-04-09T11:10:12.497-05:00What a delicious invitation! both invitations, in ...What a delicious invitation! both invitations, in fact: Mary Oliver's to come into the alluring woods, and yours to nominate poems.<br /><br />For me, it's almost anything by Edward Thomas (try 'the chalk pit' or 'as the team's head brass'), or by his brilliant namesake RS Thomas (try 'Llananno', which I talk about on my blog here: http://printedland.blogspot.co.uk/2012/11/a-sacred-space.html, or try 'Soil'.<br /><br />And enjoy your workshop!<br /><br />Ian<br />Ian Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12307429641552419242noreply@blogger.com