Right now the side of his face rests against my belly, skin to skin, his warmth magnified by mine. It is a wonder, an absolute awe-filled thing, that just days ago he was on the other side of me, tucked away and unseeable, a secret. Elliot. Elliot with the head full of hair. Elliot with the fifty-eight eyelashes. Elliot with the rounded nose that dips into rounded cheeks that slope to the tiny chin that quivers when he cries, lifts when he smiles in his sleep. A landscape. Elliot. Tiny boy so like and unlike all the other boys who have been born before. So like and unlike whatever small person I imagined my own son to be. Perfection is a rare if not impossible thing, but how could he not be, right now, so young, so soft, exactly as he is here, breathing in and out, making the sounds that all mothers and fathers know as first-speak. Secrets. He is revealing them to me, unspooling them by the minute, by the number of his sighs, and they tangle around my legs and body until I am war
So cool! Do you read Minnesota Prairie Roots by Audrey Helbling? She was also one of the Roadside Poetry selections. http://mnprairieroots.wordpress.com/
ReplyDeleteI knew that you were selected to have your poetry on these roadside signs, but it is very intriguing to actually see them. Loved the poem, and loved seeing you next to the very large text.
ReplyDeleteAmy, I have chatted with Audrey about her spring billboards. Pretty cool connection!
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks as always for your support, Bill!
This is marvellous, Emily! Lovely, evocative poem and a wonderful way of getting it out into the world. I'm so pleased to see this. Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Julian. It's a great organization, great idea, great mission. So pleased to be a part of it.
ReplyDeleteVery cool, congratulations! Love the poem and the format.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Greg. So glad you like it!
ReplyDeleteEmily! This is so cool : ) Hope to see more of these in the future. Bright and happy day to you.
ReplyDeleteGreat blog! Do you have any hints for aspiring writers? I'm hoping to start my own blog soon but I'm a little lost on everything. Would you propose starting with a free platform like Wordpress or go for a paid option? There are so many choices out there that I'm completely overwhelmed .. Any ideas? Thanks!
ReplyDeleteThanks, ND. It was a pretty cool thing to be a part of.
ReplyDeleteAnd Anonymous, I'm glad you stopped by -- and that you're a writing fan, of course!
I've used Blogger from the beginning, and I've always been happy with it, but I have heard from a lot of writer friends that they prefer Wordpress. Unfortunately, I can't tell you much about that platform. My suggestion is to take a look at blogs from both platforms and see which one appeals to you most from general aesthetic to gadgets. It all can seem pretty overwhelming at the beginning, but I've found Blogger to be intuitive and easy to use. Believe me, I'm the farthest thing from techy. If I can set one up, you can too. And writing posts is great practice for a writer; it gives you a new, deeper sense of audience.
Good luck to you! And let me know your URL when you set one up!
Looks great.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you got up to Fergus Falls to view your poem on the billboards. Quite an experience, wasn't it, to see your words and name there along the roadway? Anyway, congratulations on this achievement.
ReplyDeleteI'm curious as to whether you got into downtown Fergus to check out the Viking Cafe or anything else there.
Thanks, Stephen. Glad you stopped by.
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, Audrey--a great experience. Unfortunately we were late for a wedding, so we didn't get to stop at the Viking Cafe. I've been to FF once or twice, though, and I have good memories of the area. My friend took me to the infamous otter, and let's just say, we had a climb that resulted in photos that will never be published here!
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ReplyDeleteIn any case I'll be subscribing to your feed and I'm hoping you write again very soon!